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Crickhollow March 1420  by Anso the Hobbit 6 Review(s)
Celeste Lucretia BlackReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/14/2021
What a lovely chapter

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/14/2006
Excellently done! And I like seeing how the two cousins have come to know how to care for one another.

Author Reply: Thank you!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/12/2006
Poor Merry and Pippin, not really knowing what to expect--and Merry worrying about Frodo, too!

I love the concern of Merry's family, and all the gentle care Pippin shows him.

Author Reply: Thanks, dear! Yes Merry is worrying too much again, but he has people around him who knows that and do what they can to help him.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/12/2006
I liked the mention of how Merry and Pippin talk without saying anything out loud. I thought Berilac did the right thing by reporting a bit of trouble because it seems Saradoc and Esmeralda's visit was good for Merry and it did seem to help him open up to Pippin after they left. Can't wait for more!

Author Reply: Thank you! Going to write more now.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/11/2006
This was awesome. Merry and Pippin struggling to vent their emotions after returning to the Shire, and leaning on one another for support. I can definitely see this bothering Merry--its never easy to articulate the state of one's mind. Very clever and well done!

There *is* more...isn't there? :-) Greedy me.

Pippinfan

Author Reply: Thank you so much! And yes, there will be more. Am going to write more now. :D

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/11/2006

Berilac didn't have great news for them, but as parents do they had to check on them....

i like the confrontation between Merry and his parents, and Pippin as well, you can see how they care for each other...

But even Merry knows something is wrong and his parents aren't long to be fooled....


Please continue...

Author Reply: Thank you! I am going to write more now, so more will come soon. :D

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