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Fear No Darkness  by Thundera Tiger 2 Review(s)
FaerieQueenReviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/3/2003
Please don't let Legolas endure more of this darkness torture thing or I will come and hunt you down. Or let Celeborn cure him because he seems to know what's going on. Yes well I know that in the end good will prevail over evil, so there is really no point in urging you to do this. Also because you have already written more chapters, and I'm sure you know what you're doing, especially after reading your other masterpieces, which, may I point out, need updating. Alright after this ceaseless babbling I will attempt to make some coherent statements: Would Arwen be so affected by mortality already (tiredness, despair etc) only after five years of becoming one? Yes that is my only comment, for I am sadly lacking in ROTK knowledge. I have to re-read that particular volume (again). Keep writing, and remember to update what you have written. Thanks,
FaerieQueen

NightwingReviewed Chapter: 15 on 11/5/2003
Hi, Thundera. I wanted to check in briefly to let you know I'm working my way through this story and enjoying it immensely. I'll leave a proper review when I catch up, but for now I will say that I really admire the way you describe the creepy shadow the rescuers must fight their way through, and the methods Aragorn employs to shield himself as he tries to penetrate that evil shroud. Very nicely done.

I really approve of your Sam. He is my favorite hobbit, and you've got him just right.

Good elf owies, too. Always a plus in my book when Legolas is in mental, physical and spiritual torment. Poor thing, I love elf-torture so. Sigh...

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