| Fear No Darkness by Thundera Tiger | 2 Review(s) |
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| TithenFeredir | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 3/5/2005 |
Hmmm, a lot happening in this chapter. I felt for Elrohir and the stirring memories of Celebrian. And poor Haldir...he has surely gone looking for Orophin. Loved the comments about personal hygiene between Aragorn and Elrohir. The tension is really getting thick. Good chapter! TF
Author Reply: Many thanks! I tried to lighten the tone a bit with some of the dialogue between Aragorn and Elrohir, but I didn't want to lighten it too much because the tension is what should be driving the story at this point. Who knows if it actually worked... :) |
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| FaerieQueen | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/5/2003 |
| Excellent chapter! I wondered when all this stress would become too much for mortal Arwen. And Haldir! I hope that Orophin is alright because he is the only one that can help Haldir in this revenge-grief state he's in. I read your bio so know I understand you better. I liked the humor bit, and will now look for it in every chapter. I believe that the humor in this chapter is Aragorn's appearance? For there is nothing else funny, except perhaps referneces to certain New Year's festivities in Lórien... I'm happy that Celeborn is finally going to the forest, because he seems one of the few hale elves left. Keep writing and updating. |
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