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| My Sword Sings - Book One - 'My Sword' Series by Agape4Gondor | 3 Review(s) |
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| SurgicalSteel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/4/2006 |
| Ouch. That hurt. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/4/2006 |
| At least they are no longer trying to hide things from the boys, and Boromir is realizing it is acceptable to weep. She's done the right thing here, and I love Eomund deeply already. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/13/2006 |
| Heart-rending chapter; as Denethor's orphaned children learn the difference between uplifting stories and terrible truths. Small quibble - I can't see the boys referring to their father's sister as "Indis"; they are much too young for such familiarity in a culture that prizes good manners and a certain gravity, even among kin. Author Reply: Wasn't that hideous - the poor things - and yet, how else could Indis tell them? They were so aware of the land's history of violence... it broke my heart! As for what the children call her - I was stumped by this - Aunt sounded so 'modern' that I didn't know what to do. So I took the easy way out and just left them calling her by name. ANY suggestions would be most welcome! Agape PS - thanks for reading and responding! Author Reply: Hi,Raksha, A friend finally came up with a good term of endearment for Indis - so I have changed the chapters affected. Hope this works for you. It does for me. | |