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| Web of Treason by Linda Hoyland | 4 Review(s) |
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| Lady Saruman | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/26/2006 |
| Hmmmmm...your chapter title is completely controversial to the chapter...interesting. I think I can understand how Faramir feels about getting the news to Arwen asap. But I fear for the consequences and results. It'll affect EVERYBODY. I can't believe it! Someone murdered King Aragorn! T-T How DARE they! I will hunt them down and kill THEM. This was a nice chapter despite all the grief that I am now sharing with Faramir. -Lady Saruman P.S. Can you go on my fanfiction.net site? IT's called www.fanfiction.net/~ladysaruman. See, since I liked your stories so much I added you as one of my favorite authors! Aren't you happy! Now YOU`LL have to add me back...just kidding! Okay see you next time. =) -Lady Saruman Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I chose that poem because it is about terrible grief. If Aragorn is dead,it will indeed effect everyone. I'm glad you have your account sorted out on the other site.THanks for adding me to your favourites list. | |
| Radbooks | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/25/2006 |
| Ah, ha, the plot thickens. Faramir has to realize here soon that with the thought bond he would know for sure that Aragorn is dead and that dream he had is a real, true, vision. And, that NO ONE could overcome our Aragorn! :) He's too tough... well, I guess he was in bad shape when he left. sigh. But, Arwen will hopefully put him on the right track! :) Oh, I haven't responded to your review on my story on ff.net because I'm waiting to make sure the system is working again. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I think Thought Bonding is so new to Faramir that he does not properly know how to use it yet.He badly needs to see Arwen. I'm waiting for the other site to get back to normal too before posting,reviewing or repling. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/25/2006 |
| Faramir should pay closer attention to his dreams; they've been very accurate in the past, though cryptic. This one, conveying Aragorn's cry for help, should give him a clue that Things Are Not As They Seem. The tension level rises! What will Faramir do? And how much medicinal tea is he going to have to drink? Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review,It is so good of you to read this twice! I hope you find some improvements,I've been looking out for words Tolkien would not use and overlong sentences. I fear poor Faramir will exaust the HOH's stock of tea if they let him.He should listen to his dreams instead. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/24/2006 |
| It's a set up, Faramir! Don't believe what you see. You're being used. What a shock for him. But I hope his natural intelligence and suspicion kicks in soon. Before the evil lords manipulate him into doing something he'll regret. Author Reply: Many thanks for your greatly appreciated review.You are quite right about it all being a set up ! | |