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| Dragonfire by White Wolf | 5 Review(s) |
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| Laire Eryn | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 4/29/2006 |
| Oh my god.... this is the worst cliffhanger i have encountered in a long time! I just have one question...why did legolas lose so much blood from the arrows in the beginning? well, this is an extremely well written and original story, so update soon! Author Reply: I think that's a good thing, because there are certainly a lot of clliffhangers out there in fanfictionland. The blood loss was just a consequence of the wounds. It adds more drama to the story when a character loses a lot of blood. Thank you very much. I will update at the end of next week. | |
| Lady Saruman | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 4/28/2006 |
| Wow, that was a truly amazing chapter. I'm so glad that Ricard turned traitor against Allaura. Yay! *claps hands and jumps all over the place (tries to)* Since I'm writing this at my school, I have to keep it secret and make sure no teacher or any of the librarians sneak behind me and see what I'm doing --> that'll be completely scary. =( Treco DOES have a conscience after all...that's interesting! As you've said before, no dragon from his family did, so him being the first to have one is quite astounding, seeing as he broke the chain for the "no-conscience" dragons that were all before him. =) Seeing that Ricard had only agreed to help Allaura in the past only because he was scared of her, it was quite amazing that he decided to help Aragorn instead despite his fears of his wife. I wonder how husband and wife could have ever felt affection for each other in the first place...*stares off into space, wondering deeply* Well the good news is that Ricard now trusts Strider, though if I were in his position I wouldn't have because I would be scared that Allaura could surprise Aragorn and then break free and kill me. Certainly Ricard took a risk, because after all these years with his wife he should have known that she might have had tricks up her sleeve even without her necklace, and once she got free from the ranger, she would certainly kill him. Aragorn finds Legolas. Not a very good thing here. Since Legolas's obsession with the stone has been this long, I think it may be too late to be able to save him now. Oh no! You had better not do anything bad to him. He's suffered enough as it is. Poor Aragorn, I think I can feel his puzzled hurt when he finally found Legolas and the elf pushed him back. Interesting...your story now has ME enraptured instead....and don't take too long until your next update, please!!! -Lady Saruman P.S. This time, along with all the Hershey's, I will add Ferrero Rocher along with your usual chocolate load. Hopefully you will have finished all the chocolate that I'm sending now along with this review, because I've sent 2 tons of Ferrero and 3 of Hershey's. That'll be enough for your breakfast, lunch, and dinner every day!!! WOW! Chocolate paradise! I'll keep it coming if you keep the chapters coming. =) -Lady Saruman Author Reply: Thank you. I hoped you would like it. I also hope you didn't get into trouble at school. Treco does have a conscience, and he isn't too happy to discover that fact, either. But I don't think he'll be telling any of his family about it. Maybe he developed one only because our elf and ranger are so compelling. Ricard isn't evil, he was just terribly abused. He's going to finally show his backbone, and if Allaura kills him, then at least he’ll be free of her. There's more I could say to explain, but that will come a little later in the story, so I can't reveal it now. The reunion was certainly not what Aragorn was expecting, that's for sure. As for doing something bad to Legolas, I'll have to wait and see what the plot bunny decides to do. I love Rocher. Keep it all coming. More soon. | |
| Nayru | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 4/28/2006 |
| Thanks white wolf! My, how I enjoy reading your works!i'm glad that nothing's going right for allura! Ah! It served her right! But poor Legolas! Oh, My! what a terrible thing to happen to him! I jusrt can guess how Aragorn is feeling for elf friend. I feel especially, well, Shall we say, worried for Legolas as he's one of my most favorite characters! Please, tell me it will come out all right! Oh, please! Author Reply: Thank you. Thanks again. I'm glad you like my stories. It's great to find a fan. Allaura is where she should be, but I'm afraid we're not finished with her yet. Legolas is in deep trouble, that's for sure, and you definitely should be worried for him. Aragorn will do his best, but will it be enough? I can't tell you just yet how things will turn out. You'll just have to stay tuned. :o) | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 4/27/2006 |
| Its never too late when it involves Legolas. Of course, I'm lying now. I'm looking forward to seeing how you get Aragorn to break out of Legolas' spell, if he ever does manage it. And what part Treco will play when he returns to Aragorn and Legolas. Author Reply: Never say never. :o) However, we can only hope that in this case, you are right, and that Aragorn will be able to break the spell. Treco has a big part to play, so stay tuned. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 4/27/2006 |
| The image of Legolas enraptured is a frightening one, somehow. Hope they can break the spell soon without causing permanent spiritual harm. Very fitting she should be held in her own vault. Perfect justice there. Author Reply: That image is frightening. I hope you are right about breaking the spell. It won't be an easy thing to do, but if anyone can do it, Aragorn can, though he may end up needing Ricard's help. We aren't finished with Allaura quite yet. | |