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| Black Eyes by Lialathuveril | 4 Review(s) |
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| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/6/2006 |
| It would be a very stupid way to die ... but I somehow don't think she will just yet! Very brave of her to rescue the King of Rohan - who really should have been warned about the dangers of riding on the beach. And they're about to be stuck on a small island together until the tide goes down? With her all wet and in clingy clothes? And him able to show his manly strength and versatility. (Not like that!!) Lighting driftwood fires and providing dry shirts, while showing off admirable pecs. And a good six-pack. Could be interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: Hello Bodkin, don't give too much away! As I said before, they need a place for a cosy tête-a-tête and it looks like they finally got it. I don't know about driftwood fires (it is rather a small island), but you might get lucky with the pecs... More soon! Lia | |
| Celeste | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/3/2006 |
| Lothiriel, dear princess, when are you going to learn? Always in trouble. Right now, I'm so intrigued (so, well done!)... I'm sure that I have to wait a week for the next part! C Author Reply: Hello Celeste, She's never going to learn - not as long as she's in my clutches ;-) You know me well, it's going to be another week, but I promise to update faithfully! Saludos Lia | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/2/2006 | |
| I love your story, and I really hope that Lothiriel will tell Eomer the truth once they reach the island. Great job! Author Reply: They will be stuck on that island for a while, so the truth might well come out eventually... | |
| Alison H | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/2/2006 |
| Ah, a cliffy!! Going down to the beach was *not* a good idea, for both of them and now lives are in danger.Poor Anca,I hope he swam to safety! No wonder Eomer didn't recognise Lothiriel in her 'normal' clothes and he was positively ice-cold towards her when he realised who she was.I didn't blame him in the slightest for his reaction, but at least Lothiriel realised that her behaviour had been abominable. Now, a warrior King and a troubled Princess stuck on a small island as they're surrounded by the raging sea may just be the perfect oppurtunity for the truth to come out.Eomer will want to know why Lothiriel lied to him and Eomer can show her his caring side.I can't wait to read more! Just don't let them be rescued too soon.I want angst! Update soon. Ali. Author Reply: Hello Ali, Don't worry about the dog, she's an excellent swimmer. Also don't worry about them being rescued too quickly - it would be no fun! I couldn't resist the idea of those two being stranded on a lonely island completely on their own, especially now that Eomer knows she's been lying to him. On the other hand he now owes her his life. Things might well get interesting in the next chapter. More next week! Lia | |