News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
| About Us News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
|
| Untrodden Path by Timmy2222 | 5 Review(s) |
|---|---|
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 8/14/2006 |
| Yes, I am back and am trying to catch up again. Lovely to catch Gollum relatively easily in the end. And good to see our Strider is working to keep going in spite of his injuries. Now, to get out of there alive! | |
| RS | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 6/6/2006 |
| So close and yet so far! It would have been a pleasure taking turns with the club on Gollum! The piece of cloth to gag him was a nice touch. Oh please hurry, I just want them out of that forsaken place! Author Reply: A forsaken place? A mighty town it once was! A Dwarves' Haven! OK, just the Dwarves talking. But with some songs sung in the hall and torches on the walls, it could be a nice place, couldn't it? - T. | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 6/5/2006 |
| It is good to learn the story of the sword and see Strider a little better.Gripping as always. Author Reply: Strider's *a little better* needs to be. He should better be able to keep up with the Dwarves for they won't carry him... - T. | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 6/4/2006 |
| I am glad that Aragorn was able to tell Daevan a little about the sword that his grandfather gave to him. Daevan is becoming quite good with it. I love that part about making sure not to fall over a cliff, with the axe. Hey they have Gollum, better with them, then with the orcs. Ups man is currently in the 21st hall. He has become quite frantic, and keeps trying to get the orcs to sign his clipboard. The orcs, just run from him in terror. I think it has to do with his headlamp, makes him look like he has a glowing third eye. Author Reply: Glad to learn that the UPS man is still with us in Moria. Would be such a pity to lose him. LOL! And what a fancy kind of *weapon* he has. Probably they consider the pen and clipboard like some magic thing that would turn them into... well, I won't say! -T. | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 6/4/2006 |
| Ugh! Arent they ever going to get out of there? So close and yet so far away! Im always sitting on the edge of my seat with this story, you should be proud of yourself it is so well written and has a pull to draw in the reader so well, more please Im begging!!! Author Reply: Sorry to get back to you so late! RL turned out to be quite demanding. Well, should they get out of there? I thought, it was like a themepark. Scary people running around, alleys, which lead nowhere, no light, beasts of all sorts, abyss and else. Isn't that considered a funny day? :) Thanks for the kind words about my writing, and here you go with the next chapter. - T. | |