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Going Home  by Antane 4 Review(s)
Elanor SilmariënReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/7/2006
I LOVE this story! So much love here! Please update soon!
God bless,
Ellie

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/5/2006
The song is beautiful! Needs some music, don't you think?

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Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/5/2006
I'm still here, but only now catching up on e-mail and fanfic. Oh, Antane, this chapter was worth the wait! Seems to me you're becoming very fluent very fast, and Sam is well on his way. The joy and light just seems to pour from this chapter, and it's *so* refreshing! I love the friendly arguing and trying to outstubborn one another in the beginning-so delightful and so very lifelike! Just exactly like some of the things I've found myself on one end of. Rattling on, hoping the other won't notice what was slipped in sideways, and then seeming to win and lose. LOL! Love it!

Then the walk to the hilltop. You know, that song worked perfectly with your description of their movements and how they swung their hands; the rhythm was just right! :) I hope someday I can give you the tunes for all of these, nicely done and not with my little staticky one-minute recording program.

It's so sweet that that's Frodo's favourite spot and how he has tended it, and wonderful that he can come there without the almost overwhelming grief we sometimes feel when we go to graves. The blessing and the talk about Iluvatar, and Aragorn's message, were lovely too. Keep it coming!
God bless,
Galadriel

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/5/2006
I missed this Antane but it was obviously time well spent. I am no linguist but I am finding that I am picking up a smattering of elvish languages just from the wonderful snippits that authors include. (Just so long as we get a translation! *g*) Nice to see where Bilbo's body is buried. to misquote There will be a corner of this land that is forever the Shire!

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