| Misplaced Blame by Clever Hobbit | 3 Review(s) |
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| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/9/2006 |
| Poor Tarannon, first to be branded, then not allowed to talk or be spoken too. Pippin must help him. Maybe do some explaining to the king, Aragorn should be able to help. Think of something Pippin, hey go to Gandalf, it was his idea. |
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| Tigger | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/9/2006 |
Oh no indeed. I've been reading this very well written story and was wondering when Pippin would find out about poor Tarannon. I do hope Pippin goes to Aragorn about this. Unlike Denethor, the King's Justice is very different.
Looking forward to seeing the direction you take this in next. :o) |
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| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/9/2006 |
| 'Oh No' indeed! There are a lot of people dealing with an awful lot of misery and guilt here. Not constructive criticism except for a plea from a very impatient reader - more soon please! ;) |
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