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| Aragorn's Revenge by Estelle | 2 Review(s) |
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| Lady Larien | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/2/2003 |
| Hi! This is Simply Sara from FF.net, here like I said I'd be! This is great so far! :) One little spelling err: In the second paragraph, fifth sentence, you say "And that wasn't the worse." It should be "And that wasn't the *worst*". Now onto the next chapter...*smiles at the many lovely prospects of what Aragorn could do* Author Reply: Ahh, thanks for pointing out the mistake. I'll correct it in a jiffy IF my stupid internet connection would allow me to stay online for 5 minutes! LOL! *kicks her uni server* | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2003 |
| Legolas' over cautiosness is hilarious! uh-oh. Nothing in the food or clothes...and their going of into the wild together. Can't wait to see what happens next! Author Reply: Hehehe, glad you liked it. And thank you for the review! Legolas is getting kinda paranoid, isn't he? ;) | |