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| Masquerade by Elendiari22 | 5 Review(s) |
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| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 11/27/2006 |
| I re-read this when the next chapter arrived. I found many lovely little bits to enjoy yet again. Aragorn slipping brandy into Faramir's tea, as he has had a hard day and could use a little pick-up. Faramir's wise declaration that "I love you just the way you are". And, his going to fetch her sword for her. I liked his being there in the room to steady her. I have always thought that they were two opposites who complimented and completed each other. Yes, I have read some good fan-fics trying to pair both of them off to other people, but I never could quite "see" that. I think you write both of them very well. "in the middle of the night, when most sane people were in bed". People who go seeking adventure need a bit of a crazy streak, I think. I like your Bergil. His mostly grown-up Hobbit mentor has been teaching him well. On the other hand, this is the lad who chose to stay behind and make himself useful in a city about to be under seige, instead of going away with the "children" to safety. I think the adventurous streak was always there. I am glad that you are continueing this. | |
| Shieldmaiden of Rohan | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/12/2006 |
| Seems I fell rather behind. But I'm caught up now! Poor Faramir, he must be taking it hard, seeing his mother alive and speaking in the mirror. I still think your characterizations of Merry and Pippin are dead-on-- they would be the ones still able to joke around in spite of everything. And I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next, now that Eowyn's broken the mirror. | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/2/2006 |
| So the mirror has been broken, as directed.I was also amused by Bergil insisting to come. i am sure he has heard Pippin's story already. And, "employment opportunities"? He should like working for the King! As everyone else, i will say, Please, do continue! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/2/2006 |
| Very wise of Faramir to love Eowyn for the whole of who she is! Her feistiness is a definite advantage ... most of the time. But what a place to leave the story! What happens now? Come on - more! Soon! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/1/2006 |
| Oh, this was great! I loved everyone's determination to be "in on" this task! I was especially tickled by Bergil and the way he stood up to the King. I can imagine him afterwards, telling himself "I can't believe I said that to the King". I wonder, did Pippin tell him of what he'd said to Elrond, or did Bergil come up with that little phrase all on his own. And it was a good thing Eowyn insisted on her sword! Now, More! More! *pretty pleeaase*makes pitiful puppy dog face* | |