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Paradox of the Fourth Age  by Alassante 5 Review(s)
ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/24/2006
Well I ran out of chapters finally,I just discovered your story and usually I dont go in for it when things are changed around to much from the original but I have to say I am very caught up in this one,its like I am right there with them every step of the way,I cant wait for the next update.Please!!!!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/22/2006
To see those memories rewritten by the changed reality would be disconerting, I'm certain. Poor elleth, having to try to figure it out as it goes along!

But things are not the same, because she has led Aragorn to do as he was intended to do. And so Eru brings right out of wrong, and relieves the grief.

Author Reply: Yeah I figured it should be slightly different since the whole disaster hung on them not traveling the Paths of the Dead. Glad you are still reading :)

vampfan30Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/22/2006
just read this story & in one sitting.. it is fantastic & quite unique, can't wait for the next chapter.....

Author Reply: Thanks so much! I've already started on the new few chapters so it shouldn't be too long.

Calenlass GreenleafReviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/22/2006
Great fic...fast-paced and exciting.
The way Laurëanna is written makes her seem part of the story; no trace of Mary-Sue to be seen.
Awaiting your next update...

Author Reply: Wow thanks! That's quite a compliment. I think every author worries about being too Mary Sue. :)

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/22/2006

Lovely...

I love Laureanna, she is a very outgoing person as a young elf, and her father always blaming her frriend for her actions...

She is stronger than she believes, I believe she has her father's strength.

It seems somehow Elrohir is starting to care for her, and wonder who is to die....

Please update soon, love it!!

Also congradulations on the nomination, you deserve it...



Author Reply: Thanks so much. :) I'm glad you're enjoying it.

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