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| Lighting Fires by Gwynnyd | 4 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/6/2007 |
| Hmm. Change the type of lessons, perhaps, to teach the child the need for those lessons they seek to give him. Interesting premise, and excellent writing. | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/8/2006 |
| I like the quote from Yeats at the beginning. I think this one is a good bit on fire already, but he needs to know there are many kinds of learning. I like your descriptions of the valley, the day. And Estel is a very real boy. This should be good. i just put you on my notification, and just got the latest chapter, but will not read it yet until I read all of them, to not spoil anything. Author Reply: It is a completed story. Feel free to read it all at once. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Gwynnyd | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/8/2006 |
| I like this already! Estel is a very real 11 year old, and Elrohir is just marvellous with him. Why do I get the feeling that something will happen on this adventure? Jay | |
| Gandalfs apprentice | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/8/2006 |
| Hey! So nice to see this around. In case I failed to mention it before, I love this sentence: Estel quivered like a leashed hound on a scent. So exactly him! | |