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| Lighting Fires by Gwynnyd | 2 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/6/2007 |
| So, the boy is very serious about this, and Elrohir finds himself teaching his own lessons to ease the distress. Good. | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/8/2006 |
| I felt very sorry for Estel here - he tried so hard and didn't give up, but he still couldn't solve the problem. He should have asked Elrohir to start with - his brother was injured, but not unconscious; and he has far greater experience. Author Reply: Yes. He should have asked! I know how kids get 'an idea' of the way things ought to work and what it takes to disabuse them of the notion. Estel was very caught up in the exercise. Gwynnyd | |