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One Who Sticks Closer than a Brother  by Lindelea 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/15/2006
Definitely feverish and out of his head for the moment. Poor Tolly. Hope they find him very soon.

Author Reply: Somebody will find him soon, I think, for this story will not be paced as molasses-in-January slow as the last one was, thank goodness!

Whew.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/15/2006
Oh no! Hobbitsicle!

Fingers tightly crossed that Wren decides to rush back to a warm stable in preference to hanging loyally around her collapsed master.

Author Reply: Well, have been consulting with Sulriel about that... so all "horse" behaviour in the next few chapters has her stamp of approval. The Muse aims for realism, as you know. (So much as possible, anyhow.)

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/14/2006
Oh dear! Some of you authors are getting far too good at cliff-hangers! *g* We will keep reading you know - even if you don't leave us dangling off cliffs or clinging to icy rocks! *shivers and grins*

Now we don't need Tolly replicating Ferdi's tumble down the stream! At least he is likely to get the mud washed off!

Author Reply: Sorry about that! I seem to organise chapters in cliff-hangers... guess it keeps my interest in the story, not to want to leave the characters hanging too long.

The thought had crossed my mind as well, that Tolly has at least washed off the mud, at least up to his knees. Poor wet, bedraggled hobbit, who would ever recognise him as one of those high-and-mighty "Great Smials Tooks"?

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