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Trolls  by White Wolf 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/19/2006
Catching back up.

An awful torture, I think, and I hope that they figure a way to escape soon.

Nasty trolls--nasty trolls!

Author Reply: Welcome back.

That was kind of a cruel thing to do to them, wasn't it? They are sure going to try.

Very nasty trolls.!

kayteeReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/14/2006
Good thinking on how to communicate. Now if they can only get put into the same cage. Dead meat can't be too appealing. Unless that is the Troll's way of tenderizing their meat. Are they or aren't they unconscious, only the author knows for sure. Keep the updates coming quickly. How many chapters will this be? Waiting impatiently for the next installment.

Author Reply: Thank you. I'm glad you didn't think it was funny, which had me a little worried. I didn't want to detract from the dialogue.

I had thought of the tenderizing bit. I even mentioned it to a friend of mine, though it was not said seriously. They just like to torture anything that isn't a troll. :o) I am the only one that knows if our guys are faking or not..

I don't know yet how many chapters there will be. It depends on how things develop. More will be coming soon.

Calenlass GreenleafReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/14/2006
Ouch.
The part when they were communicating was smart.
Now...are they really unconscious, or just faking it?

Author Reply: Ouch indeed. I was kind of worried that the musical conversation might come off as comical and take away from the diaglogue itself. I'm glad you didn't think so.

Ah well, you know I can't answer that just yet. Stay tuned. :o)

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