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| An Act of Desperation by Shieldmaiden of Rohan | 1 Review(s) |
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| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 11/27/2006 |
| Faramir faced him steadily, born of slightly lesser blood but no less noble, with a strength in his gaze that showed he could match the Northern Dúnedain. Aragorn who? Faramir is well-written here, strong and noble and high-born, but not as remote as Aragorn, and more suitable for Eowyn. Good chapter; the only flaw being that neither you nor Tolkien described what Faramir wore to the coronation... Would it be possible to take this story to Faramir and Eowyn's wedding, with some of the passage of time noted by letters or just skipped? Or have the wedding as an epilogue? Keep writing! | |