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| Four Nights and Three Days by Antane | 5 Review(s) |
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| Armariel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/23/2006 |
| Nice job of getting into Frodo's mind. Scary and effective. Another light grew and that too drove toward Frodo’s heart. He stood in the midst of a battlefield and he feared for the strength to fight until the end. Lovely! ~~~{~@ Author Reply: Hannon le, my dear! I am glad you enjoyed. We stand in the same battlefield ourselves. Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/23/2006 |
| Yes, Light battles with Darkness for the heart and soul of Frodo Baggins. Wonderfully written, Antane. Author Reply: Hannon le, my dear Larner! Glad you enjoyed. I thought it made sense that Frodo gets to know a little the One he will soon say yes to at the Council. Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/23/2006 |
| Wow *shivers*. | |
| Althea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/22/2006 |
| I love that Frodo can hear the comforting voice promising to stay wtih him. The image of the battlefield is very powerful. I'm looking forward to the next part. Author Reply: Hannon le! We stand in the midst of the same battlefield ourselves and the same fight is going on in our souls. Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Elemmírë | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/22/2006 |
| You're moving right along here! I didn't get a chance to leave you a review for the last chapter, so I'll leave you a double review here. I really enjoyed the last chapter, Antane--Gandalf and Bilbo's concern (I was wondering when Bilbo was going to make an appearance), but most of all I loved Gandalf's explanation of the Creator to Pippin, et all and the praying lessons. The hobbits' innocence reminded me of little children first going to Church and Catechism. Poor, dear Frodo. He's so full of pain and he must be so very scared, but I'm glad he's realized he's not alone. He truly has become a battlefield for good and evil. Can't wait for more! Author Reply: Hannon le, my dear Elemmire! I am so glad you are enjoying. Pippin is so fun to write and I liked that bit about prayer myself. :) We are all on the same battlefield and engaged in the same warfare as Frodo. Have you read the latest chapter of Love Endures? I am anxious to know what you think. Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |