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| The Dark of Night by Ellie | 6 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/31/2008 |
| Oh, dear--Elrohir had been cocooned WITH eggs? And here comes one of the mothers, from the sound of it! How terrible! At least the starwater destroys the eggs! And love the black humor. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/30/2006 |
| Being trodden on will be the least of it! When their family find out what they've been up to E2 will be toast! But at least they've discovered how to get rid of spiders' eggs. I do hope they don't get trapped up there with nasty parent spiders and hatchlings. That is the last thing they need! Author Reply: Yep, the twins do serve some useful purpose on occasion. You'll have to wait and see what happens next... Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Redheredh | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/29/2006 |
| Ooo, I liked this chapter for its interplay and action. :) Things went along very realistically for the intrepid rescuers you sent in. I was getting worried you were gonna go for a Alien twist, but a Them flavor was fine, just fine, thankyouverymuch! But!! *They* are coming back and when they find the egg-sacs disposed...well, I am glad I am only reading and not there! Run away! Run away! Author Reply: This chapter was fun to write with all of the creepiness, and human guys are wont to start poking fun at each other when things get too spooky , so I figured elves would do this, too. I'm pleased you enjoyed this chapter. Hope you like ch 8! Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Calenlass Greenleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/27/2006 |
| tense...very tense. At least..I hope the twins will be all right. Author Reply: Yes, it was tense. I didn't get to my replies to reviews before you reviewed ch 8. Hope I resolved it well enough to suit you! Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/26/2006 |
| Ugh! again,this is giving me the creeps but I love it, your descriptions of the spiders cave and the dead body make me want to run far away but I cant wait for more!(go figure) Author Reply: I'm glad the dexscriptions are working so well. I made my family watch the Shelob scene of ROTK several times and made my kids look for tiny details (like dripping water and tiny dead animals) to be sure I got the descriptions right. Thrilled I could creep you out! Hope you enjoy ch 8! Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| vampfan30 | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/26/2006 |
| I think that I might be feeling a little saner now that they are at least halfway rescued... maybe. ^__^ Author Reply: GLad you are feelings daner. That is good, but they aren't out yet. muwahahahaha Thansk for reading and reviewing! | |