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Tales of Life by Aelaer | 4 Review(s) |
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Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/30/2006 |
I like the last line - it relates the defeat of the Corsairs with Thorongil's later adventure and puts the two together. Author Reply: Thank you! It wasn't originally planned, but I thought it fit well. Glad you liked it. | |
meckinock | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/29/2006 |
Very nice, Suvi! I like how Thorongil inspired confidence in the men. Author Reply: Thanks. Yea, Thorongil definitely is the kind of guy to put confidence in people, which is extremely admirable. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/29/2006 |
Very well done, although I see what you mean about the ending. A problem of wording in the first sentence of paragraph four, but otherwise well done indeed. Author Reply: Yea, I see what you mean, now that I look back at it. I may edit it one of these days. XD Thanks for all of your reviews. <3 | |
Amy | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/29/2006 |
Lovely! You made me feel as nervous as the crew about the pending attack. *hearts Thorongil fics* Author Reply: Aw, thanks. Yea, Thorongil fics are excellent, but so hard to come by. I love them as well. | |