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| Day and Night by Peredhil lover | 5 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/9/2007 |
| And resting, the three brothers do find healing. Wonderful. | |
| Laureleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/10/2007 |
| I had to catch up - pesky life demands attention every once and again - and truely enjoyed the latest chapters. Finally! I'm glad Elladan is finally begining to *see* Estel as the man he is rather then something that is in constant need of protection...I imaging he will have much to think on in the coming chapters. I look forward to more. Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing Laureleaf. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. Yes, Elladan has started to see Estel in a different light, and does have a lot to think about. The next chapter will be the last one of this story, but there are a lot of ideas brought up here that I would like to explore in future stories if I ever get around to writing them. Thanks again, peredhil lover | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/10/2007 |
| Poor Elrohir. His desperate determination to reach his brothers is driving aside all his own exhaustion and pain - no wonder Glorfindel is so concerned. I'm not surprised that Elrohir ignored him though, and I'm glad Glorfindel saw the sense in a compromise. Trying to reason with either of the twins at a time like this seems a *very* wasted effort! I loved the final scene with E3 all sleeping peacefully. Very nice, and very sweet. Jay Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing Jay. I'm so glad that you liked the final scene. I was aiming to make this the last chapter but it was getting far too long, so I decided to cut it in half, and this seemed like a nice place to end it. Not a cliffhanger, but after all E3 have been through, I thought they deserved a break! ;-) peredhil lover | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/10/2007 |
| Blood smeared on the rock Nice opening line! I cringed at the image of Elohir's hands. I hate having my nails break, but then, I'm a sissy compared to the Sons of Elrond. So Estel's act of healing shows the hands of the king, revealing him to the twins as it will to the people of Minar Tirith. Cool idea. Author Reply: You're not the only one to have that reaction to the image of Elrohir's hands! I hope it does effectively convey both Elrohir's determination and desperation. I'm so pleased that you like this idea for Aragorn to be revealed to the twins as the future king. Thanks for reviewing, daw. peredhil lover | |
| French Pony | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/9/2007 |
| I like the hints here that Aragorn is the first in a long line of the heirs of Isildur who has turned up with this healing ability. There had to have been a reason that the events of the Ring occurred in his time, that everyone knew that he, not his father or grandfather, was the one destined to be King. And the healing ability is foretold in that rhyme from Gondor that Ioreth remembers. So this is a good way to bring it up. Very nicely done. Author Reply: Thanks for the kind words, French Pony. I'm glad you liked this idea. peredhil lover | |