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Drabbles  by Lindelea 7 Review(s)
Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 29 on 2/16/2007
Ooo, chilling!
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Thank you! Glad you stopped by.

God bless you too,
Lin

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/20/2007
‘All’s well, lad. We’ll be in good time.’

Wow! So much said in only 100 words!
A comforting dream turned into a nightmare, but the nightmare didn't end after Sam woke up. Still, he was there, in good time, to see and help to end it!

Thank you!

Author Reply: You know, your highlighting that part made me think twice. Yes, Bilbo might've been talking about a dreamed burial, but there also might have been, in the back of Sam's mind, some sort of reference to the ending of the Quest.

I hadn't written that meaning into Bilbo's words, but I can certainly see it there.

Thanks!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/20/2007
Possibly Sam needed this moment in the Shire to fortify him for what was ahead. I wouldn't be surprised. Grounding him in the green of home, with his mentors pushing him on for the final effort.

Author Reply: Good point, I hadn't thought of that. A few moments (seconds, even) back in the Shire, in a *garden*, a place of strength for Sam (and also the source of his greatest temptation), might be fortifying, indeed. Nicely put.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/19/2007
Beautiful! You capture that whole feeling of a nightmare, the trapped feeling in which that which makes no sense is simply understood.

Then he wakes to a reality just as bad! Poor Sam!

Author Reply: It always bemuses me, the way dreams seem so real, and make perfect sense (at the time), and then after I wake up I realize that of course (for instance) two houses on opposite sides of the country cannot be next door to each other.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/19/2007
ooo! *shiver* Well done! Even though I had a feeling where this was headed, it still gave a good eerie shiver :-)

Author Reply: Very astute reading!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/19/2007
Oh, indeed--from nightmare into nightmare! And what nightmares--Frodo's death as a youngling in old Mr. Bilbo's care to Frodo struggling with Gollum, then lying, bleeding and probably dying indeed, as both look to be doing anyway as Mount Doom tears itself apart in the aftermath of the destruction of the Ring!

A wonderful work, Lindelea!

Author Reply: Yes, indeed, nightmares! What a relief it must have been, though, to see Frodo freed at last, even if they anticipated death following shortly after.

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/19/2007
Wow! From nightmare into nightmare. Nothing could keep Sam away from his duty for long, could it. Powerful little punch of imagery. I see it has been a month since I reviewed anything new of yours. Real Life must have been getting in the way again? Best Wishes to you!

Author Reply: Thanks!

Yes, combination of Real Life and the Muse taking an extended holiday. Think good thoughts... perhaps she'll return and take up one of the languishing tales once more.

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