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| Paradox of the Fourth Age by Alassante | 3 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 2/26/2007 |
| Oh, no! Now she has changed the history once more, and may well allow the Corsairs to reach Minas Tirith with their reinforcements. Oh, young elleth, you need to get a grip! It is not for nothing one of the names for Sauron is Lord of Lies. Author Reply: lol Laureanna is a little overwhelmed and confused. ;) You'll have to keep reading to see if she does the right thing in the end. Thanks for the review! | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 2/1/2007 |
Very nice... I like how you started it out with Sauron and the witch king, it made you feel how evil he was. And he certanily hated Galderial. Poor Laureanna, she has a lot to hold, and these dreams seem to be guiding her. Can Aragorn listen to her I hope. And you have to shake your head at Elrohie, he has grown close to Laureanna, but still fights his emotions, but I think she'll get him in the end... Great job... Author Reply: Thank you. Yes, I figured Sauron would hate Galadriel quite a bit since she keeps avoiding his attempts to beat her. Elrohir and Laureanna might find their way to resolve their differences, you'll have to keep reading and see. Thanks for the review. :) | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/28/2007 |
| I sooo love this story!!!!! Elrohir is so sweet and wonderful when he surrenders to his feelings. I pity L though. She is suffering so much and I am worried that Auron seems to know she is there. I just hope that she is not about to make a horrible mistake based on her vision. PLEASE update soon. This is such a good tale! sigh... You're such a good writer. Your chartacters are so wonderfully done and you have expressed the pain and anguished futility of the future Middle Earth so well. So very sad indeed. So you need encouraging e-mails to help you write more chapters more quickly? I can be a good cheerleader when necessary, I just look silly in the outfit.. Author Reply: I'm glad you're liking it Ellie. :) Laureanna's mistakes could end up changing to future again - after all, this is AU. You'll have to wait and see. And I beat you'd look cute with pom-poms lol Thanks for the review hon. :D Author Reply: Geez - can I have any worse spelling???? What I meant to say was - Laureanna's mistakes could end up changing THE future again - after all, this is AU. You'll have to wait and see. And I BET you'd look cute with pom-poms. Now you see why I have a beta lol | |