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| The Treasure Hunt by Jay of Lasgalen | 19 Review(s) |
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| Eleil | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/18/2007 |
| Again your stories rock my knee high socks! The twins ROCK! anyway...its really good, poor Glorfindel, having to deal with the evil cuteness of the twins. “A jewel …” “A pot of gold …” “That’s at the end of a rainbow, silly!” “Well, a golden coin then …” “Two golden coins – one each!” I love that part...so....right for the mood of the story 1000000000\10 | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/23/2007 |
| Aha! The missing are found just as Glorfindel runs out of riddles. And love that the fish riddle was figured out by watching out the window! Heh! | |
| paranoidangel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/15/2007 |
| And there I was thinking you'd come up with those riddles on your own! Although I got entirely distracted by that website before posting this review. I liked this story, it was sweet, and of course their parents were their heart's desire. I liked that they annoyed Erestor with their constant questions and it was Glorfindel who came up with a good way of distracting them. | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/10/2007 |
| Oh that was absolutely wonderful! All the riddles keeping them busy until they finally lead to their heart's desire indeed. I loved it. “I hope so,” he agreed fervently. “I really do hope so.” Hehehehe! This was really great! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/2/2007 |
| What better treasure than their parents getting home! And such a relief for Erestor and Glorfindel - who probably couldn't imagine managing to hand the twins back unharmed! I loved the way the twins seized the opportunity to head to the waterfall - after all, they were virtuously only doing as they had been told. And Glorfindel to the rescue - whilst they watch him setting the clues and sneak along behind him. (I expect they enjoyed seeing Glorfindel have fun!) Such sweet twins. | |
| perelleth | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2007 |
| This was hilarious, Jay. But GLorfindel was wonderful to take it up to entertain the troublesome boys... in such a dedicatedway! He really took the time! I had to chuckle at the last part, when they do find their treasure, and GLrofindel agrees that they behaved! Lovely, lovely tale! | |
| Selene Aduial | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/28/2007 |
| Kids always love a good treasure hunt, and elflings will be no different. I'm sure Erestor was glad that Glorfindel knew how to keep the twins occupied, before the drove him crazy with their questions. The twins did find their hearts desire in the end. *grin* Your twins are always adorable | |
| Idril Celebrindal | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/27/2007 |
| Wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed the treasure hunt! Idril | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/27/2007 |
| *lol* Erestor wasn’t very understanding of little elflings longing for their parents, wasn’t he? And then to send them to the waterfall, knowing they’re not allowed near it ... *shakes head* Nice to see how the twins tried to follow this command and still as much as possible to obey the command not to go there. Though I am glad Glorfindel came to the rescue. He was much more sympathetic and thought of a wonderful way to distract them. I was rather impressed about the way they solved the riddles. And of course, Elrohir fluttering his eyelashes at the elleth in the sewing room ... *lol* Of course they were no trouble at all. What’s one pillow after all? And Erestor can’t tell their parents it was trouble that they longed for them. That is only good of them ;-) | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/25/2007 |
| Loved the treasure hunt, my dad used to do that for my mom, on their anniversary he would have her hunting all over, for her gift. The twins were wonderful, and Erestor and Glorfindel more so. Sending them to the waterfall, what was Erestor thinking. Author Reply: Treasure hunts are fun, no matter how old the participants are! Poor Erestor wasn't thinking at all when he sent the twins to the waterfall - he just wanted to get them out from under his feet! | |