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Missing  by TopazTook 5 Review(s)
AndreaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/2/2007
Oh, dear! Poor Pippin!
That sounds as if he will have to wait a very long time before help arrives.

I loved the chapter in which Pippin "looked after" his Grandmama, a very nice hobbitess.

When Frodo and Merry are now dancing with the others, Merry might have succeeded in cheering Frodo up AND Frodo might have forgiven Merry that he did not mention the birthday party!

But still, someone has to find little Pippin, as soon as possible!


Author Reply: Well, we'll see what happens to Pippin in a little while (I realize the title of the story does give a *wee* hint of a clue...)

Thank you for the comment on the previous chapter. I rather like Violet as well.

Frodo and Merry are at least having some fun at this party. (They like dancing with pretty lasses, although Pippin's not so thrilled with the concept yet.)


Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/1/2007
Uh-oh. Looks like Pippin has found trouble. It also looks as if it will be a while before anyone looks for him. I was glad to find more of this one and now, a cliff-hanger! I will be anxiously awaiting more.

Author Reply: Pippin does seem to have a knack for finding trouble, doesn't he? This would be a key cliffhanger chapter. I'm hoping to have more up relatively soon.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/31/2007
Poor lad! He's lost his biscuits and, apparently, consciousness as well. Hope that it's not a wild dog coming. Poor Pippin!

Author Reply: Yes, poor Pippin -- not only does he get injured, but he also loses the food! Hmm, well so far we know it's an "animal's" whufflings...

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/31/2007
Oh dear! Poor baby! I hope he's found very soon...

Author Reply: Yes, poor Pippin: he certainly suffers a lot in fanfic.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/31/2007
Oh no! Poor young thing! I hope someone finds our lad soon.

So beautifully written, Topaz!

Author Reply: Thank you, Pearl!

The poor little guy has rather gotten himself into a mess, here...

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