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Elven Song by Jocelyn | 1 Review(s) |
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docmon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/14/2004 |
You did it. You really did it. I had to turn my computer back on after shutting it down, just to say this: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Ok, that out of my system (well, not really), this is proving a great story already. Well, as long as you bring him BACK, somehow. And that's an order. ;-) The background of the Black Hunter is really interesting. I like how you've interwined the backstory with the present. This is exactly why I try not to read incomplete stories. If there had been no 'next chapter' to follow that, now what would I have done? Insanity comes to mind... I really am enjoying the story. And I'm not usually so... two-year-oldish? But you killed him... monica | |