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| Dark Vision by White Wolf | 6 Review(s) |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/8/2007 |
| A very dramatic opening. I liked your Aragorn and Arwen scene.I hope it is a bad dream or something? Author Reply: Glad you like it. This was the first time I have written Arwen into a story, so I wasn't sure how she'd come across. I'm pleased you liked her and Aragorn together. Or something. :o) | |
| Naledi | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/3/2007 |
| A great start, but how could you do that to Legolas! I'm eagerly awaiting an update in the hope that Aragorn can find a way to bring the elf back (and Arod). Author Reply: Thank you. Do what? :o) The next chapter will explain everything, so keep the faith. We'll see what, if anything, Aragorn can do to change things. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/2/2007 |
| A most distressing vision; and a most distressing find. Now--how do they turn back time to save Legolas? Author Reply: Yes, you are quite right. Aragorn is certainly suffering at the moment. Turning back time would be the simple solution, but things aren't always simple nor are they always hopeless. :o) | |
| Beverly | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/1/2007 |
| Wow! What a way to get everyone's blood to pumping. I hope that the next chapter begins with Aragorn waking up from a terrible nightmare!!! I love the way you have moved the story along quite quickly. It make for a much more enjoyable read. I also love the notion that Legolas never waits to be anounced...he just goes on in and knocks himself. Can't wait for the next chapter...this sounds like it's going to be just full of mystery. Peace Beverly Author Reply: I love wow. That's a nice thing to hope for, but we'll have to see if that happens. :o) The story was written for a contest, so it had a length limit, and that forced the story to move along fairly fast. Glad you liked it. I always felt that Legolas didn't like to stand on ceremony, certainly with his friends, unless it was a formal occasion that demanded it. More soon. | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/1/2007 |
| Wow White Wolf, what a start! Author Reply: Wow is good. :o) More soon. | |
| galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/30/2007 |
| OOOOOOOOHHH NOOOOOOO! How could you! You awful person, how could you do this to my precious! Beautifully written though, if I do say so! I can't wait, he's going to bring him back right? RIGHT?! O good lord, I'm going to watching for updates like a hawk! Write again SSSOOOOONNNN!!! Great Job! Galimeril ;D Author Reply: Oh dear. Take a deep breath, and don't panic. Thank you for the kind words. The next chapter, which I will post next week, will explain everything, so hang in there. :o) | |