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| Dark Vision by White Wolf | 6 Review(s) |
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| Naledi | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/12/2007 |
| What a relief! I'm so glad Aragorn's message got there in time. I love the idea of a vision that seems to last for weeks. You finished the tale without mentioning whether anyone went to hunt down the orcs though. I hope someone finishes them off before they get hold of anyone else. Author Reply: You and me both. That vision 'extension' was my little plot twist, which I was hoping no one would guess. This story was written for a contest, so the length was limited, therefore I couldn't cover everything I normally would have in a longer story. However, knowing how thorough our king is, I'm sure the orcs were taken care of. :o) | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/10/2007 |
| Aha--a vision within a vision. Have had times I've dreamt of waking from a dream, only to realize I'm only dreaming of waking. Had one of those this afternoon, in fact. So glad Toldon was there and so right as to what could be done. Author Reply: Yes, indeed. I wanted a plot twist, and that one seemed perfect. i've had those kinds of dreams, as well. Weird, aren't they? Thank goodness for Toldon. Had more time passed before Aragorn or Arwen thoguht of the solution, it would have been too late. But all's well that ends well. | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/9/2007 |
| This was great! I was so afraid you were going to leave us hanging forever! Nice job - good tension, great dialogue, good ending! LOL Author Reply: I'm glad you liked it. I would never do that. :o) Thank you for the compliments. Those were certainly goals of mine while writing this story. | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/9/2007 |
| Just one word - Brilliant! Author Reply: What a great thing to say. Thanks! | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/8/2007 |
| An enjoyable and unusual story.I'm glad all turned out well in the end. Author Reply: I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the unusual plot twist. Yes, all's well that ends well. :o) | |
| galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/8/2007 |
| *sigh* That was beautiful! I'm sooo glad that my precious isn't dead, the golden one is my life! Excellent writing all around. Kudos! Galimeril ;D Author Reply: I'm pleased you liked it. Yes, I managed to snatch the dear elf out of the jaws of my evil plot bunny, who I'm sure would have been happy to end the story with the first chapter. :o) Thanks so much. | |