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| The Harpist's Redemption by Coreinha | 2 Review(s) |
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| Fimbrethil | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/22/2025 |
| Somewhere in the first paragraphs I realized this would be a non-peaceful Three Men in a Boat, to say Nothing of the Dog… So Arwen is protecting the children and the others? Also it is strange that Elladan is seasick, considering his uncle, grandfather, and at least one of his parents’ love of water. I guess it is different enough in a storm. But, he has have to sailed to Valinor somehow! | |
| Lisette | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/4/2003 |
| Looking good so far! I'm enjoying the older Legolas and the twins, although having Aragorn come back was probably the best... not to mention the puppy. I see that you're shooting for a particular breed - which? A collie? Siberian husky?? In any case, you write well and story is certainly flowing along - please keep posting. I look forward to more! ;p Author Reply: it actually is a Collie, and I'll hit on that at some point in the story, lol. (I have a collie, and I'm convinced the breed had to originate among the elves, as they're such wonderful, intelligent animals) Thanks for the compliments! XOXO Cor | |