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| Vows by French Pony | 5 Review(s) |
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| perelleth | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/8/2007 |
| I am finally here... Good job from light and routine light to an unusual darkness and the second death in Aman...what a shock to the family...a prelude for the changes that will come unstoppble now! | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/12/2007 |
| It is really sad to see this horrific event so close on the heels of happiness and wedded bliss. I really like how you showed their reaction to something not being right with the light and details like Maedhros offering to help Feanor choose his clothes and Feanor's reaction. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/12/2007 |
| Part of me hopes that Calime will be left pregnant. She - and her parents and Nerdanel - could do with being left with a bit of hope to help them survive all the ages of Arda. But Feanor! That elf deserves some intensive psychotherapy. Or a kicking. Aman teeters on the edge of disaster - and he's just about to push them all over the edge. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/8/2007 |
| What a moment for the poisoning of the Trees, much less the thefts of the Silmarils! Alas, and Finwe dead? The beginning of the long end for the children of Feanor! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/8/2007 |
| A dramatic moment in more ways than one. I don't think I've ever seen it shown in another fanfic. Good job, FP. Feanor seems to be coming apart even before this happens. | |