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| The Road to Edoras by Dreamflower | 12 Review(s) |
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| Imhiriel | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/16/2007 |
| And atop it all, crowning the hill was another house, a huge one, far bigger than The Prancing Pony, which up until now had been the largest building she had ever laid eyes on. I had to laugh at this: comparing The Prancing Pony with Meduseld is like comparing a chicken with a falcon, IMO. But of course the Hobbits have almost no possibilities for a decent comparison, have they? I enjoyed to see what some of the Hobbits thought as they are nearing their destination. It's neat way to remind the readers of the diverse motivations again after so long on the road. They had arrived in Edoras at last. My feelings exactly *g* - I was beginning to feel they might never arrive without any more delays and mishaps... I'm very much looking forward to what happens next: more interaction between Hobbits and Big Folk, yippieh! And we're going to see Éomer King! Author Reply: That was exactly the reason I included the comparison, as a reminder of the fact that however many miles these hobbits have travelled their experiences are still very limited. (And I also think it will be funny in the sequel, when they approach Minas Tirith, and they realize how much bigger *it* is!) I wanted to focus a bit on a couple of the hobbits whose POV we haven't seen much--with an ensemble as large as this one, I do not want to spend all my time on the "stars" like Freddy and Beri. Yes, they have arrived, finally. | |
| GamgeeFest | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/14/2007 |
| Yay! They're there at last. I'm sure once they get over the feelings of overwhelment, they'll settle in just fine. There's still some ugly business ahead of them to deal with, but I hope they enjoy Edoras every bit as much as Merry did. Author Reply: Yes, at last! And they will settle in and do what needs to be done there, before heading on to Minas Tirith. And I think they'll make some good friends there, as well. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/12/2007 |
| It's good to see Eomer feeling as nervous about his role in this as the hobbits are in theirs. I hope they all find themselves reassured by actually meeting each other. Especially Mosco. Even Cado and Clodio. Although I don't mind at all if Clovis and Dago continue to suffer for rather longer! Author Reply: Well, Eomer knows everyone loves hobbits, himself included. So he wants to do this right. It will eventually be a reassurance, I think. | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/11/2007 |
| I love the view of Edoras from each of the Hobbits' point of view. Blood will tell, on both sides I am sure. I also think that Eomer's reaction to the news of their impending arrival is what makes him such a good King. Author Reply: While we've been getting a number of POVs, I did want to get in a couple of the more neglected members of the party, such as Rolly and Mosco. It is. A good king worries about such things--Eomer is not cocky; he knows how well-loved hobbits are. | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/10/2007 |
| I love that last bit with Berilac and Viola. hehehe They are quite darling together and you can just tell how very much Berilac loves her. After all, there they are in sight of something so impressive and he only has eyes for her. I can't wait to see how Freddy does here. He's been so good at it all to this point. Drat! I only have one chapter this time! LOL Author Reply: Beri and Viola are just irresistable, aren't they? I think Freddy is going to realize that Frodo's trust in him is not misplaced. | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/10/2007 |
| The penalty in Gondor for what they did is death? It has been too long since I read the trial chapter, I think. I don't remember the details anymore. Poor Mosco. And yet, do I detect foreshadowing here? He *is* going to be of use, isn't he? Somehow I just feel it. *sigh* Alas, poor Frodo. Author Reply: Well, they violently attacked a peaceful embassy. It's certainly not something that anyone would ever expect from hobbits! I'm sure that Aragorn has been working hard to change the laws and penalties, but I don't suppose he ever thought this law would be broken in the Shire of all places. Yes, Mosco will be of much use before the end--though perhaps not until the sequel when they reach Minas Tirith. Poor Frodo. *sigh* | |
| Baggins Babe | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/10/2007 |
| A fascinating look at the thoughts of the hobbits as they arrive at Edoras. Cado is really beginning to realise just what they are in for. Sad to learn that Frodo is being silly and stubborn - Sam needs to give him a stern talking to! :-)) He can see how brave others have been but fails to see his own achievements. I was wondering where you'd got to. Hope the notification for my last chapter of 'Centenary of Special Significance' came through. Author Reply: Yes, Cado's been realizing it over the last few chapters. But now it's really hitting home. Frodo *is* being silly and stubborn, and he probably does know it. I don't think a stern talking to will help, though. Not in *this* more canon universe. *sigh* I thought I'd commented! I may have been interrupted or pressed for time! I'll have to go back and see--that *was* the one with the letters, right? | |
| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/10/2007 |
| There ya go; leave me hanging, will you?! I've been *waiting* for this moment for a long time, lol. I liked eavesdropping into everyone's thoughts; especially Mosco's. His reminded me of Merry and Pippin feeling like excess baggage on their journey. I, too, should like to what his role will be in this tale...I'm beginning to think he is in for a real treat. I also enjoyed the memory of Freddy and Frodo's conversation. I wish Frodo would have been able to see his successes as well; I'd like to believe that might have helped him with the guilt, but perhaps not. *sigh* At least we have the Eucatastrophe Series! :-) PF Author Reply: They've arrived. But there are still a few more chapters left... Mosco has not had much to say or do so far, with such a large cast. I hope to give him a larger role as we go on. Yes, we do have "Eucatastrophe"! *grin* I'm glad we can see him that way. | |
| Hildigrim | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/10/2007 |
| This story is good fun, especially the swimming lessons. (I'm with Fredegar.) I do have one quibble, however. I'm not certain I believe that "there would have been no choice in their sentence" in Gondor with Aragorn and Arwen reigning. Perhaps Cado's information was out of date? Anyway, I look forward to more chapters.... Author Reply: Well, this is only a year since the Ring was destroyed; Aragorn is doing his best to make the laws of Gondor less harsh than they were under the later Stewards, he probably has not had time to deal with them all. And Clovis' and Cado's offense was worse than the usual: They attacked with *violence* a peaceful embassy with whom their own people were treating. This would have been a capital crime in almost any country up until very recent times in the real world. Of course, they were acting more out of youthful stupidity than treachery, but the Rohirrim will have more leeway in how they handle this right now. Anyway, I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so far! New chapters will not be long in coming. Thank you very much for stopping by to read and review! | |
| AspenJules | Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 5/10/2007 |
| I loved reading all the different reactions to the approach, and especially starting off with Eomer's reaction to the prospect of passing judgement. I can't imagine he hasn't passed judgement on some of his own people by now, but they are a known quantity, and the only hobbits Eomer's known are ones he cared for sincerely. That would indeed make a young King a bit ... on edge. Poor Mosco... I'm looking forward to him finding his place. And the flashback of Freddy's conversation with Frodo was heartbreaking, as well as maddening. As others have said, *why* can't Frodo see that their situations were similar... that if Freddy was justified at running from the Riders, he was even more justified in falling to the Ring finally, after so much time and when the Ring had reached the height of its power. It's ultimately frustrating that you ended the chapter right there but I guess I'll deal with it. Can't wait for them to meet Eomer King and to hear the miscreants' sentences. Author Reply: You're right--it's the fact that they are *hobbits*--members of a rather beloved race, and not only that, but they appear so small and defenseless. Plus they are kin to the Ringbearer, and Sir Merry and Sir Pippin...has to make him a little nervous. Mosco *will* find his place before they go home. Frodo may see the situations as similar, but he still thinks what he did was worse; it's the Ring's legacy, after all. It won't be much longer. | |