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| Yours to command by Lialathuveril | 8 Review(s) |
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| SpoonMaidenOfTheShire | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/6/2007 |
| Aww, she kissed him. Should have done that first...might've kept him awake longer. That dagger sounds suspiciously like one of the Nazgul blades, or is it actually something from Harad? I don't know a lot about them. ~SpoonMaid Author Reply: I believe the Nazgul blades take longer to work, so I think it's some poison from Harad (not that I know all that much about it either!). And hopefully Lothiriel isn't too late with her 'kiss of life'... Lia | |
| Cuthalion | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/5/2007 |
| Aha! So it was a serpent's tooth, and this is certainly some kind of neurotoxin. You make my nerves suffer with that chapter, and no mistake (to quote Sam Gamgee). And the idea to raise Éomer's flickering spirit with an attack of sheer passion is... intriguing. *grins shamelessly* Cúthalion P.S. Did you receive the MEFA-notifications? Black Eyes is nominated this year, as is Yours to command.. They both deserve it. Author Reply: Yes, of course it was poison, I just couldn't resist adding this twist at the end. I thought Lothiriel should get the chance of rescuing him as well - in an amusing way. We'll see if it works...and what her father thinks of it! And thank you very much for nominating Yours to Command for the MEFAs - in fact I filled in the story details tonight. Lia | |
| irene | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/5/2007 |
| I absolutely love your chapter starts. They're so well designed one hardly gets the idea you invented them all. Great work! Author Reply: Hello Irene, nice to hear you like my 'quotations'. I spend considerable effort on them, so I'm pleased to hear they're appreciated. Lia | |
| Lianna | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/4/2007 |
| OK, I'm suitably worried. That smile on Muzgâsh's face just before he died certainly suggests that Eomer could lose his leg here. I think Muzgâsh would enjoy the idea of crippling the King of the Mark. Update quickly, please! Author Reply: Hmm, yes I agree Muzgash would certainly enjoy seeing Eomer suffer - but of course what he would really have liked to do is to kill him. More soon, I promise! Lia | |
| Unheard Chime | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/4/2007 |
| Well, that ought to wake him up! And I am not worried in the slightest... Aragorn is a very very good healer and we all know that Eomer has to survive. OK, I lied, I AM a little bit worried... I hope they don't have to amputate the leg or anything. Author Reply: Nice to hear you're not worried in the slightest...then you won't mind having to wait for a week to find out if Lothiriel's plan is going to work...or not...these Southron poisons can be pretty nasty, you know... I know I'm mean! ;-) Lia | |
| SurgicalSteel | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/4/2007 |
| About what I figured as regarded the poison - now Aragorn's just got to produce a suitable antivenin in time! As for Lothiriel kissing him... well, well, well. Author Reply: Let's hope that Aragorn is successful in his search - and Lothiriel manages to keep him awake somehow. More next week! Lia | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/4/2007 |
| Aha! Well, it worked for Prince Charming waking Sleeping Beauty--it OUGHT to work for Lothiriel waking the King of Rohan! Hhe! But it definitely ought to be ennervating for him. Come on, Eomer--stay with us! Author Reply: To be honest I didn't really think of the fairy tale, but now that you've mentioned it, I'm almost tempted to throw in a few dwarves in the next chapter! Hopefully it will work out - with all the practice she's had lately Lothiriel should be quite good at kissing by now. Lia | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/4/2007 |
| That's what I was afraid of. I'm glad there was help nearby though. Author Reply: Well, I promise that you will find out early next week if Lothiriel's tactic is going to work. Lia | |