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Where Do Mothers Come From?  by LKK 12 Review(s)
SaberReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/20/2004
I never reveiwed to this??? Bad Saber! BAD! *slaps self several times* Such an idoit...


AHEM...anyways...I was just stopping for what the 100th time to see if you've updated yet? No...wait...106th. My bad.


*pounces on LKK and starts beating her over the head with a rubber chicken*


POST DANGIT!!! POST!!! *WHACK* POST POST POST!!! *WHACK WHACK WHACK* POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOST!!!!!!! *big humongous WHACK!!!*

Author Reply: OW!! That hurt!
*rubs head*

whimper I've never been whacked with a rubber chicken before. whimper

Okay, okay, okay! I get the hint, Saber. I'll get working on the next chapter. I promise!

Thank you for staying interested in the story and for letting me know that you'll still interested. I appreciate it. :-)

*rubs head again*
Owwwww.

Lasse-LantaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/13/2004
Oh, I know you must have little ones or be channeling for them *g*. The behavior is so perfectly descibed, it had me chuckling remembering a similar incident when my nieces and nephews were young. I guess little elflings aren't immune. Lovely.

Author Reply: LOL, no, no little ones of my own. But I do have a niece and nephew who don't realize they're serving as character models. And I have to admit, the whole "birthday kiss" idea might have a slightly autobiographical touch to it! ;-)

Thanks for the review!

LKK

SparxReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/7/2003
LOL!! That's hilarious. I'm guessing that he really IS Elrohir lmao. Wow that is a really spirited little elfling, Lenniel! LOL. Can't wait to see chapter two!

ChasingLibertyReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/7/2003
OH WOW! LMAO!

That was so funny! Poor, poor Elrohir... It was very cute though. I can't wait until Elladan finds out. I wonder what his reaction would be. :)

MarnieReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/6/2003
ROTFL! Oh, I can so see it. Poor Elrohir! (Unless it was Elladan all along, in which case, serves him right). *and* poor Lenniel. Girls may be yucky, but I know exactly how she feels.

A great start to what looks like a very entertaining fic!


Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/6/2003
What a lovely story. Poor Elrohir! I rather like 'storm Lenniel', but I hope Elrohir gets his own back! And what about Elladan when he finds out? Whose side will he be on?

I love little twins fics (although in my own stories, Elrohir is the one chasing the girls, very sucessfully too!)


Jay

xsilicaxReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/6/2003
Oh poor Ro, I guess he hasn't quite reached the age where kissing women is fun yet.
Now isn't that Elleth just a wonderful stroppy girl *g* she reminds me of a young me I think. Though quite why she wants someone two years younger to kiss her...

Hehe, lovely start, I can't wait for more,
Cathy.
xx

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/5/2003
I love it - storm Lenniel! Poor Elrohir - to be attacked by an elleth who wanted to kiss him!! Well, a day will come when he wil be a bit more open to such behaviors. For now - well, I hope Nana finds Elrohir and gives him a hug. And if Elladan is smart, I think he will stay hidden! Very cute, looking forward to more. :)

coonzalasReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/5/2003
Very cute! Elrohir was adorable with his repeated 'I'm Elrohir!!!'

Antigone_QReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/5/2003
Funny! I especially liked Elrohir's unenthusiastic:"May the Valar bless you on this special day." Where does the term "elleth" come from? I haven't seen it used that way before.

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