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Bits and Bobs  by Llinos 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/21/2007
What a way to be forced to mate! Poor couple!

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/19/2007
(((((Although I can't take you without a fight,
Your soul cries out as you growl and bite.)))))

I like her spirit. I also love the way you've managed to get into the character's mind. Not many can think like an Orc but I do believe you've done that here. Another of my favorites.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/18/2007
I never thought that an Ord could feel the same pain of a lost love (or lust) that humans do. I have changed my tune. Smagnu obviously has a broken heart that pines for Ddraigspelt's beautful love (body).

Again, thank you (and Smagnu) for sharing your gift. :-)


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