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Little Ones about Little Ones  by Golden 5 Review(s)
Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/15/2007
Beautiful Golden. You paint wonderful word pictures :-)

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/27/2007
Love the ending! Made me think he was looking into Frodo's eyes before the trip West, seeing past the pain into the past... But could be wrong

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: That is also a nice idea. I had is being Pip and Merry, but Frodo fits in as well. Also I had it quite early after the Ring war back in the Shire, but shortly before Frodo goes to the West would work as well.
It is written quite open, so you are very welcome to make your own picture whose eyes Pip is looking in and to what time he does.
Thanks for reading! :)

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/27/2007
Lovely imagery! This indeed had a very dreamlike quality; I loved the ebb and flow of it--I'm thinking it's Pippin, and Merry, near the end of their lives...

Author Reply: Thank you for the review Dreamflower.
Well when i wrote it I imagined it it is Pippin when he is back home in the Shire after the Ring War. However it would also fit in at a later time. Picture it like you like to picture it. :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/27/2007
Pippin and--Merry? They have changed, lost much and gained much.

Author Reply: They indeed have. Thanks for reading! :)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/27/2007
Behind the shadow the past is alive. The love, the warmth, the care - it is still there.

A timeless smile, bound never to leave.


How absolutely beautiful. :)

Author Reply: Thank you very much for reading Shirebound! :)

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