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| Aragorn's Revenge by Estelle | 1 Review(s) |
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| Lady Larien | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/2/2003 |
| Awww...that was wonderful! Simply wonderful! *many smiles* This story is on my favorites for sure, and you are, too! One little quip with this last chapter: The sentence "It is half past three in the morning my dear prince. I think it could wait until morning" is kind of awkward because you say its 3 in the morning (implying that it is already morning) and then you say it could wait until morning. I'd suggest something like ""It is half past three in the morning my dear prince. I think it could wait until the sun is up." Keep writing! Awesome job! You kept me entertained and laughing through every chapter! God bless, -Larien Author Reply: Thanks for the little quip again. My morning is a time when I can actually think coherently so I didn't think 3am as morning. More like an ungodly hour to me. LOL! Anyway, I will keep that in mind if I write more ungodly hour fics. LMAO! I really appreciate your kind reviews since this is my first piece of work and my first try at LOTR humor... well, second try if you consider "The Haircut" the first. :) I'm currently posting my second fic (By The Hands of Another). More serious, not much humor but lots of pain and angst. If you're interested, please R&R :) | |