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| An Autumn Fair in Halabor by Soledad | 2 Review(s) |
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| Denise | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 11/24/2008 |
| It's little asides like this that I love so much in your stories: Somewhat consoled by this decision (one that he renewed every single day), Wethinoc left the bakery to cross the town, leading to the fairground. Just that parenthesized comment says so much! I like the way you laid out Wethinoc's attitude, one that any bound artisan would feel sympathy for. No, one can't blame him for bossing his brother around a bit. :) Author Reply: Well, these are ordinary people and no saints. It's only right to make them a bit bossy and selfish sometimes. ;) | |
| Neilia | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 12/23/2007 |
| Good chapter. Interesting food and customs. Now on to the next. :D | |