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Out of Memory and Time  by Shireling 7 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/5/2008
Excellent revelations. Now to learn who he was and where he came from. Perhaps thrown overboard from one of the Corsairs ships? Interesting.

StefaniaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
Keep it up, Shireling (Helen).

Throughout this chapter, I kept thinking, why doesn't SOMEONE see if Min can read. I enjoyed how you introduced Min's reading and writing abilities.

As far as Min's identity is concerned, his fair beard might indicate either Movieverse Boromir or Movieverse Faramir. If it's Boromir, then this would be my first Boromir lives!! AU tale. If it's Faramir, then we are in for a major explanation of matters in Minas Tirith. Or could that "fair beard" be a red-herring, and Min is someone else. That would really be something. The suspense continues as I wait for you to update the story.

- Steff

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/28/2008
Minnow's recovery is well-delineated here, though he obviously has a long way to go. I still think he's Faramir; but there is a possibility he could be someone else. The 'fair' whiskers are confusing...

Do post the next chapter soon!

Author Reply: Thank you, Raksha

The next chapter should go some way to explaining the mystery!

Helen

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/26/2008
Another gripping chapter. I've grown to like Min and his friends very much.My friend thinks Min is a character I know well,but I'm far from certain. Eagerly awaiting more.

Author Reply: Hi Linda

Thank you so much. Min has endeared himself to his new friends and hopefully the next chapter will provide some more clues as to his origins.

Hugs
Helen

NeiliaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/26/2008
Such a good story. So well contructed...and leaves us wanting more. Definitely a keeper. Love, Neilia


Author Reply:
Dear Neilia

Thank you so much for your kind comments.

More soon

Hugs

Helen

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/26/2008
Greata new chapter!You know, I can not wait to read the next chapter, I really like this story. Good to see Min recovered, even if he is deaf.
Still thinking that he is Faramir, Thanks and update soon.

Fantasia

Author Reply: Thank you Fantasia

I hope the next chapter will throw some light on the situation.

Thank you for reading

Hugs

Helen

ireneReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/26/2008
Such a well-written story, such a pleasure to read!
Well, I still think Min cannot be Faramir, but what if he's neither Boromir or Faramir? The term "youngster" makes one think...

Please update soon!

Author Reply: Hi Irene

Thank you so much for your kind words and support.

I think the mystery of Min's identity will become clear in the next chapter.

Hugs

Helen

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