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The Making of a Ringbearer II: Anchored  by Henna Gamgee 7 Review(s)
nancylea57Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/12/2008
we have been discussing sugar all through the paragraph and last line turns us to flour; me personally both are white poison, others?????

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/24/2007
Reason indeed to be embarrassed, I must say! Heh!

cpsings4himReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/22/2004
Heheh! What a cute chapter!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/23/2004
*giggle* So Daisy had a crush on Frodo. Well, hopefully, Belle will nip *that* in the bud! Poor Frodo!

RogerGamgeeReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/14/2004
Obelia,

I found this story earlier today while browsing the StoriesOfArda site, and I have to say I'm very impressed with what I've seen so far. You've done a marvelous job capturing Frodo's thoughts and feelings here, and it shows. I couldn't help but laugh at how Frodo reacted to the Gamgee sisters and their obvious attraction to him. It makes for a very light hearted story. I look forward to seeing how the next chapters turn out. Well done!

Author Reply: Thanks so much for your review! I don't know why I keep forgetting to reply to reviews on this site, but better late than never I suppose... Anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I love writing the light, funny parts. :)

JULES6Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/14/2004
Frodo's first meeting of Sam's family, especially Daisy was funny to read and enjoyable.

"Frodo was sure his face was beet red. He clutched his sack of flour and fled up the hill as if a dragon was hot on his heels."

The last line of this chapter finished it off nicely and Frodo's uneasiness around girls. Wonder what Sam would have said or did if he was there when his sisters met Frodo?

JULES


Author Reply: I don't know, but I suspect practical Sam would have been rather disgusted with his sisters... :)

MirielReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/8/2003
Goodie! I'd been hoping someone would write soemthing about the lasses that had crushes on Frodo. Bravo!

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