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| Moth to a Flame by Primsong | 6 Review(s) |
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| Cuthalion | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/3/2008 |
| Brilliant idea! *applauds* Very, very good. Cúthalion P.S.: Would you mind if I translate this into German? You can have a look at my site with translated Tolkien-fanfiction here: http://www.cuthalionsbogen.de/stories.html | |
| Edlyn | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/2/2008 |
| What an utterly scary possibility! Wonderful description. | |
| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/1/2008 |
| Well, wasn't that an interesting twist! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/1/2008 |
| *shudder* What a scary prospect! But it leads one to wonder--what if a bird or something decides to eat the "Ring-moth" before it reaches its goal? Would the bird then be enthralled to it? You really have the potential for a lot more here! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/31/2008 |
| Aii! Truly a moth to a flame here! And now we knows, we does! A horrible possibility, of course, and using that unforeseen icon from the movies! Wonderful, Primsong--truly wonderful! | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/31/2008 |
| its proboscis uncurling to taste the sweetness of it. only the Ring remained, yet now it had wings. completely in its thrall, beating its wings in whispering blur it rose up, up OOOh - and this line was chilling.... it shimmered only once as that white face slid across its curving beauty. Poor Frodo!!! Very very nice - You do wonder why the Ring waited all this time, when It could have talked a slug in the caves of the Misty Mountains to take it long long ago! LOL | |