This is nicely done. The characters are well evoked and the Sil stuff is clear and worked in with care. We'll see how the Black Hand does!
Author Reply: *Wince* Oooooh, umm, I really appreciate your kind review, but Turin (And Orodreth) will never have more than a cameo in this story, and no dialogue. Tolkien has already written their story, about ten thousand times better than any attempt of mine could be. I felt like no one would give a darn about a story starring OC's, so I just threw in a few mentions. My apologies to you, or anyone else, I may have misled. |