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| Just A Cold by Aelaer | 9 Review(s) |
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| meckinock | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/7/2008 |
| Ah! Thanks for sharing the backstory. I'm glad you decided to re-work this and post it. | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/7/2008 |
| Thank you for an enjoyable story.I love reading stories about Aragorn as king as well as writing them!I liked your ARwen and Faramir too. | |
| Szepilona10 | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/6/2008 |
| I enjoyed the deleted scene! It was funny! God bless! ~Szepilona10~ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/6/2008 |
| Very interesting indeed! Heh! | |
| Estelcontar | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/5/2008 |
| The dialogue is not as bad as you make it to be. I've read a lot worse. I'm glad though you got rid of the gangs. This way you changed a somewhat melodramatic and implausible plot into something more mature I think. Can't wait for the next story. | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/5/2008 |
| A not to implausible scene! Though I loved the innkeeper no matter what... | |
| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/5/2008 |
| Oh, I don't know, the deleted scene is believeable, I have read much worse, all except for the gold coin, silver would have been more appropriate, think of the 36 silver pennies Butterber gave Merry for the ponies! More please, Lynda | |
| Kitt Otter | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/5/2008 |
| Wonderful wrap-up! Arwen had her say, and Aragorn finally got to bed. He still will have a lot to say when he wakes. Eowyn is perfectly right. *grins stupidly* Now you are right also: of course Arwen and Aragorn would have some... issues. I enjoyed this story immensely! And thanks for the extra scene. -Kitt :) | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/5/2008 |
| Sometimes RL gives one the best ideas for stories, doesn't it? Glad you didn't have to fight off ruffians when you were ill ;-) The deleted scene made me smile. Oh yes, Aragorn must have had a hard time to keep from laughing aloud! It's fun to imagine the face of the innkeeper when he finally realised just *who* this stranger was after this conversation! Lovely story - thank you! | |