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| From Last to First by Songbird | 1 Review(s) |
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| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/25/2004 |
| Now I know the other children's names, thanks. So Teril was a bad child, huh? Does that excuse him being killed? Was he killed in retaliation for something? I'm confused! One point I am NOT confused on is that if I'd found MY child being so cruel to an animal he'd have been beaten soundly, made to give the creature a proper burial and then I'd have beaten him again. You do NOT let kids ever think being cruel like that is acceptable! Both Nana and Ada are responsible for that Teril turning out wrong like he did. *shaking my head* Making Legolas go stand out there like that was kinda mean. I wouldn't have done that to him, but I don't know the traditions you have created for your elves here, there's no precedent for the reader to go by. I'm hooked into the story though, so on to the next part. :) | |