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Bombur's Diet  by Primsong 5 Review(s)
DrummerWenchReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/8/2008
Yay! What fun, more Bilbo and the Dwarves! I just love the interactions among them all. Please keep it up!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/7/2008
*grin*

I am grinning like a loon. I do so love your Bilbo--and poor Bombur! When even a hobbit thinks he's eating too much, well, it's definitely a good indicator that a small change might be in order!

I loved the interactions you have between Bilbo and the Dwarves--this is so delightful!

Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/6/2008
Oooh, I LOVE Bombur; next to Thorin he is my favorite of the Company. He is as good-natures (and dense) as ever. He should have an honor bestowed upon him by being able to eat more than a hobbit. You are good at making a fun and brisk narrative, sprinkled with "bites" of description.
I am very happy to have found this today!
-Kitt : )

SoledadReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/6/2008
Poor Bombur. His only delight is eating and he should have restrain himself for heath's sake. Although, out-eating a hobbit is no small feat, I guess. :))

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/6/2008
Poor Bombur--finally reaching the prophesized excess weight! Heh! And we wonders what ripped, we do.

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