Words of a Wise Woman by Aelaer | 3 Review(s) |
Lady_Roisin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/21/2008 |
I must agree, Ioreth was one of the best minor characters Tolkien created. I love how you've portrayed her. I can almost hear her spreaking as I read this story. You utilized first person perspective fabulously. Writing in first person I think is a special talent because it requires an author to really know the character who is narrating the story, and you did a great job with it. I haven't read a whole lot of stories that have Ioreth as a main character, and it was nice to see her used as the narrator. I bet The Wise Woman had a whole bunh of great stories to tell.
A job well done! |
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Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/29/2008 |
Ah, that is our Ioreth! Well done! |
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Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/27/2008 |
Oh, I love the way you seem to have caught Ioreth's breathless voice! Very nice! |
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