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My Sword Trembles - Book Three - 'My Sword' Series  by Agape4Gondor 4 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/19/2008
Good to see Faramir in such high spirits! Let's hope that Sinister Saruman is kept away from him!

Update soon!

Author Reply: I've been trying to tell Indis that all morning, Raksha... get the kid away from the nasty wizard......

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/18/2008
Very nice--the spell broken and Hurin warding Indis about from Saruman. Now, if they can only keep the creep away from the boy and from laying on any more spells on others!

Author Reply: Dratted spells... Yes, at least one is broken and Faramir is free, for the moment...

Thanks for reviewing!

TariReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/18/2008
"Faramir blushed. “I forgot. It pulled me from the water. Are there any more cookies?”'

Isn’t that just like a child? First they tell you Eagles rescued them and then immediately ask for food as if the incident was immaterial. His enthusiasm has returned along with his appetite. That’s great.

It seems that Saruman has been making enemies already. Too bad Eomund can’t save Theoden from his grasp.

Tari

Author Reply: *giggles* glad you enjoyed the eagles and cookies story!

As for Saruman - Eomund better watch his back!

EdlynReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/18/2008
It is so good to see Faramir acting like a normal little boy asking for more cookies. But at the same time he is still aware of what things he can and cannot say. I enjoyed this very much. But I'm worried about Saruman. That particular Istar scares the daylights out of me and his presence definitely doesn't bode well for anyone in Gondor or Rohan. Why do I think that the time between now and Strider/Thorongil's return is likely to be fraught with trouble caused by the wizard? Very good chapter and excellent writing, particularly the conversation.

Eru bless,

Edlyn

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Edlyn. I'm glad that Faramir is healed... He is a smart child and quick thinking, that's for sure....

As for Saruman - Indis is a strong woman - I'm hoping she'll come away from her time with him intact!

I am very afraid for Eomund!

*blushes at the compliment* Thank you!

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