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On the Wings of the Storm  by Lialathuveril 9 Review(s)
VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 17 on 11/18/2008
Oh, this was hard to read for somebody given to claustrophobia. And very, very scary indeed.

CuthalionReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/22/2008
My God, she must be crazy. But as angry as I want to be about the silly boy, bringing her in danger for the sake of his dog, it is a blessing that she saw them in time. How on earth can you stop the chapter here! And I'm still supposed to iron. Dratted laundry!

Cúthalion

Author Reply: You were lucky, for you could just click on the next chapter ;-) And children have their own priorities, haven't they.

Lia

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/20/2008
I have to say I'm glad the dog is being rescued. I love the way the kid's so devoted to him.

But what a scary turn of events. I'm not sure I'd be able to move at all. Go Lothiriel!

Author Reply: Hello Daw,
children are that way with dogs, aren't they. I remember nearly being run over by a car, trying to rescue mine when I was about 11 (we both survived without a scratch).

Faced with orcs I would probably hide away somewhere, but Lothiriel knows of course that if she does that, the women and children in the caves will pay. Or Eomer and his riders coming down those stairs. Not easy!

Lia

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/20/2008
I was expecting Wulf was an animal! Glad I was right! Now, to see what her diversion brings them.

Author Reply: Hello Larner,
my readers seem to know me pretty well by now, quite a few guessed as to Wulf's nature. Lothiriel's diversion will bring them a little time, but will it be enough?

Lia

galimerilReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/19/2008
AHH! So terrible! U ended on a cliffie again! I wanna know what happens! *throws tantrum* two thumbs way, way up! u a goddess!

Author Reply: Hello Galimeril,
sorry about the cliffhanger! I don't know why I have so many of them, it's become a bit of a habit. But I really promise to try and update quickly.

Thanks for the compliments!
Lia

shadowfaxReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/19/2008
I hope you don't kill the dog! Can't bear innocence to be murdered....
Its weird since in this other story on Eomer/Lothiriel, Lothiriel is a huge animal lover and all!

Good story throughout!

Author Reply: Hello Shadowfax,
I like animals, so don't worry about the dog. Worry about Lothiriel... ;-) I don't know why, but somehow animals have crept into each of my stories so far.

Thanks for reviewing.
Lia

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/19/2008
Hi Lia.
I find myself looking forward to your updates every two weeks. I appreciate it very much that it's consistent, otherwise I'd suffer from Eomer-Lothy "withdrawal"...

Thanks for another entertaining installment. I had my suspicions on Wulf and I'm sure you will turn this latest event into something that may help out our favorite couple somehow. Also, knowing that you are closely following canon actually makes reading this more exciting. :-)

Author Reply: Hello Whitewave,
I try to update regularly, especially with evil cliffhangers like this. Also if chapters are a long time coming, you tend to forget what happened before - I forget myself at times!

As for this event helping our couple, it will be a step in the right direction, but it will still take a while for the two to resolve matters.

And it's good to hear you're liking the fact that I'm following canon. It's fun for me to try and weave her story around the facts from the books.

Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/19/2008
What an exciting chapter!This story goes from strength to strength! Lothiriel is a remarkably brave woman.I guessed about the dog.

Author Reply: Hello Linda,
it looks like I'm getting predictable, quite a few readers guessed about the dog! But somehow with this Lothiriel, she always jumps into a situation with the best of intentions (and quite a bit of courage), yet it doesn't always work out the way she had intended.

More soon!
Lia

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/18/2008
Dear Lothiriel, sometimes your plans are very dangerous!
How can you stop the chapter right there! Please, send Eomer to the rescue...

Great chapter, love every detail, from the dog to Amrothos wish to be a corsair.


Author Reply: Hello Fantasia,
well, Lothiriel has a plan. But like you pointed out, her plans do not always work out the way she thinks! But I promise to update as quickly as possible, and who knows, Eomer might even put in an appearance ;-)

Lia

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