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| Dies Irae by Linda Hoyland | 5 Review(s) |
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| Inzilbeth | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/10/2008 |
| I loved your description of the First Circle. What a place that is! And oh, am I getting anxious about Aragorn while all this is going on! Great chapter. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you enjoyed how I imagine the First Circle.I would imagine poor Faramir is half worried to death too.I was,and I wrote the tale! | |
| Celeritas | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/9/2008 |
| This chapter was highly colorful. I loved the contact with the Haradric culture and Faramir getting to disguise himself as one of them. All of the OCs are proving fascinating. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked my attempts to portray Harradic culture and the OCs. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/9/2008 |
| Well written, and the mood of the place was well presented, as is Faramir's concerns for his friend. Now, will she come? She'd best do so, or I fear Faramir will haul her over his shoulder and carry her bodily up the city to the top! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I agree Faramir will do anything to get the darwisa to come! I'm pleased you liked the chapter. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/8/2008 |
| Adiva is certainly an original and refreshing character! Looks like Faramir is on the right track; but will he be in time? And the Darwisa is introduced in a very mysterious, dramatic fashion that heightens the tension. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you like my Ocs. Poor Faramir must be fearing with every moment that passes that he will be too late. | |
| Lady_Roisin | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/8/2008 |
| Harad is so fun to write about. I was glad to see you include some of it in this chapter. I had to put on some of my bellydancing tunes to help set the mood. I like the addition of the shaman woman. I could almost see the bright colors of the house and such. I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 4!!!! Hang in there Aragorn!! Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.It is so sweet of you to review on more than one site. I'm pleased I could create the atmosphere for you.Let us hope Aragorn's tough Numenorean genes help! | |