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Dies Irae  by Linda Hoyland 6 Review(s)
CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/16/2008
The darwisa has proved to be as intriguing a character as expected--powerful women in a setting like this are such fun to read about! It was especially appropriate that Zafirah agreed to help the King not because of his title or positions, or even because of the threat held to her, but because he is beloved!

Arwen in Queenly Mode was amazing!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked the darwisa.I think it shows she has wisdom in her reason to help Aragorn!

I think there is far more to Arwen than meets the eye.She is after all Galadriel's grandaughter.

InzilbethReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/16/2008
Oh my, that was too short! Faramir was great here, forcing his way through the guards and as for Arwen, go, girl, go!! Please update soon!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked Faramir and Arwen in this chapter.I hope to post more next week.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/16/2008
Well, they found the darwisa alright! Zafirah is certainly an interesting character.

Very suspenseful; and it's always nice to see Faramir demonstrating the resolve and resourcefulness Tolkien gave him, not to mention Arwen exerting queenly authority.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked Faramir and Arwen in this chapter.It was fun to give Faramir a chance to show his quality.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/16/2008
Cliffhanger!

I really hope Zafirah arrived in time to rescue Aragorn.

That was a great chapter. I really like the darwisa, especially her answer to Faramir's most urgent question.

“Is there an antidote?” Faramir demanded.

Zafirah smiled again. “Of course. What use would it be to us, if we could not control the powers of life and death the plant holds!”


Of course there had to be an antidote. Otherwise the poison would be useless. For unlike some men, women think ahead ;-)

I also loved how Arwen used her position as the Queen to decide against the healers.

I only wished the next chapter was already there...

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I think these wisewomen know a great deal they will never reveal to men!I'm pleased you enjoyed the chapter and the darwisa.I hope to post more next week.

Lady_RoisinReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/15/2008
The entire chapter was filled with suspense, lots of moments where I caught my breath. I like the Darwisa a lot. I like how faramr was so persistant and wasn't willing to back down. I loved how you ended it with Arwen commanding as the queen she is. This is really wonderful and exciting!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked the chapter and the darwisa. I love writing queenly Arwen.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/15/2008
It's a good thing the second guard knew him. Now, to get the antidote into him!



Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.It will not be easy at all giving the antidote to Aragorn!

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